Week 8 Comments and Feedback

After reading all the feedback comments that I have received on previous blogs, I have found them to be quite useful especially when people have feedback that can help improve my posts. I think on the other hand as well that I have been leaving useful feedback in return. After the multiple articles that we read earlier on in the semester about how to give good feedback, I have retained that information and tried to apply it in my feedback. I like to give praise but also helpful suggestions or tips that will strengthen writing. With that being said I always start off my feedback comments with praise and then in the middle add some suggestions and finish off with praise again just to keep the comment on a positive note and make it clear that I am not coming off in a harsh or rude tone. In the end, I am looking forward to trying to help people strengthen their writing as well as people helping me make my writing better as well.

(Cute feedback Image)

I chose this image because sometimes we take feedback personally not in the way that it was intended. Therefore, I liked this image because it shows that feedback helps you see what is ahead of you, meaning the potential that your writing has if you take what is said. to you and apply it for the better.

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